Persons Unknown -- "The Edge" -- 06/14/10
#26
Re: Persons Unknown -- "The Edge" -- 06/14/10
Just a little nitpick but the continuity director on this series should have been fired. The fortune cookie messages kept changing in every shot. The "y" in "you" is capitalized in one shot, then not, then capitalized again. (I noticed this because I thought it was odd that "You" was capitalized in mid-sentence.) The message to our heroine (whats-her-name) is all on one line in one shot, two lines in the next. There were a few other things as well but I can't remember now.
#27
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Re: Persons Unknown -- "The Edge" -- 06/14/10
Her fortune from episode 1 said "Kill Your Neighbor and You'll Go Free." However, I think someone put another fortune in her room with the gun that said "Kill Joe and You will go free"
#28
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Re: Persons Unknown -- "The Edge" -- 06/14/10
Here is the shot from episode 2, 3:09 in:
You are thinking about the NEW fortune that was left with the gun she found in her room which said kill Joe.
#29
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Re: Persons Unknown -- "The Edge" -- 06/14/10
liked the 2nd episode better than the 1st... I'm probably in until the end.
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Re: Persons Unknown -- "The Edge" -- 06/14/10
The writing on this show continues to be simply awful. It is so amateurish I'm left to wonder if there isn't a nepotistic reason this show made it to air. The dialogue is some of the worst I've ever heard outside of first year screenwriting classes and either the ridiculous continuity errors are purposeful and will be explained later, or they simply don't care and ran out of money (it is nothing more than a summer replacement anyway.) The characters are as thin and one dimensional as a business card and bordering on pure stereotype. Moira is the "expositional character" who turns out to be a mental patient, but is able to perform deep muscle tissue extraction with a swiss army knife, no anesthesia and no sanitization. Oh, and they're able to run afterwards... 
I'll give it one more episode but if the writing doesn't get any better (and I hold no hopes that it will) then I am out. Life's too short to watch shitty TV.

I'll give it one more episode but if the writing doesn't get any better (and I hold no hopes that it will) then I am out. Life's too short to watch shitty TV.
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Re: Persons Unknown -- "The Edge" -- 06/14/10
The writing on this show continues to be simply awful. It is so amateurish I'm left to wonder if there isn't a nepotistic reason this show made it to air. The dialogue is some of the worst I've ever heard outside of first year screenwriting classes and either the ridiculous continuity errors are purposeful and will be explained later, or they simply don't care and ran out of money (it is nothing more than a summer replacement anyway.) The characters are as thin and one dimensional as a business card and bordering on pure stereotype. Moira is the "expositional character" who turns out to be a mental patient, but is able to perform deep muscle tissue extraction with a swiss army knife, no anesthesia and no sanitization. Oh, and they're able to run afterwards... 

#34
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Re: Persons Unknown -- "The Edge" -- 06/14/10
I agree completely. This show isn't going to win any awards but it's entertaining enough to watch during the summer.
#35
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Re: Persons Unknown -- "The Edge" -- 06/14/10
yup to everything ^^^ said up there....
we're in it till the end, too much damn fun not to be....
we're in it till the end, too much damn fun not to be....
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Re: Persons Unknown -- "The Edge" -- 06/14/10
The writing on this show continues to be simply awful. It is so amateurish I'm left to wonder if there isn't a nepotistic reason this show made it to air. The dialogue is some of the worst I've ever heard outside of first year screenwriting classes and either the ridiculous continuity errors are purposeful and will be explained later, or they simply don't care and ran out of money (it is nothing more than a summer replacement anyway.) The characters are as thin and one dimensional as a business card and bordering on pure stereotype. Moira is the "expositional character" who turns out to be a mental patient, but is able to perform deep muscle tissue extraction with a swiss army knife, no anesthesia and no sanitization. Oh, and they're able to run afterwards... 
I'll give it one more episode but if the writing doesn't get any better (and I hold no hopes that it will) then I am out. Life's too short to watch shitty TV.

I'll give it one more episode but if the writing doesn't get any better (and I hold no hopes that it will) then I am out. Life's too short to watch shitty TV.
1) The creator and Producer (Chris McQuarrie) is an Academy Award Winning Screenwriter.
2) It's a co-production with FOX and Televisa Mexico meaning it was shot entirely on location in Mexico using local Mexican production crews saving millions on production costs.
3) The cast is mostly B actors (Jason Wiles and Alan Ruck are probably the best known of the cast) again saving lots of $$$ in costs.
4) NBC paid a very small licensing fee to FOX to air it.
I agree with your assessment about Moira and the removal of the implants. But, I'm not watching this looking for reasons to hate it. I've been entertained through 2 episodes. Harper's Island, which was a similar 1 and done show was entertaining even though alot of people complained about the acting too. Your comment about the dialogue is really subjective. I haven't noticed anything that was really stiff or unnatural sounding. I think it's already tough for a TV writer to create stuff that someone would actually say in real life in order for it to work in the plot. Most of the shows that I watch that have better production value than this, I always ask myself if someone would actually speak that way in a normal conversation and probably 9 times out of 10 I would say no.
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Re: Persons Unknown -- "The Edge" -- 06/14/10
I'm really hoping they have something really nifty in store to justify what's happened so far. I want to like it, but so far the crappiness is drawing me out of the story.
#38
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Re: Persons Unknown -- "The Edge" -- 06/14/10
as long as it finishes, the ratings for Monday's ep were abysmal at best.




