DVD Talk review of 'Child's Play'
09-03-08, 07:57 AM
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DVD Talk review of 'Child's Play'
I read Michael Zupan's DVD review of Child's Play at http://www.dvdtalk.com/reviews/read.php?ID=34490 and...
Michael Zupan's recent reviews of "Child's Play" and "Speed Racer" seem to contain valid information, but a gross lack of commas render them unreadable. There are about 17 to 25 missing commas in each. Alas; the kids these days need to brush up on basic punctuation.
Michael Zupan's recent reviews of "Child's Play" and "Speed Racer" seem to contain valid information, but a gross lack of commas render them unreadable. There are about 17 to 25 missing commas in each. Alas; the kids these days need to brush up on basic punctuation.
09-03-08, 02:49 PM
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I read Michael Zupan's DVD review of Child's Play at http://www.dvdtalk.com/reviews/read.php?ID=34490 and...
Michael Zupan's recent reviews of "Child's Play" and "Speed Racer" seem to contain valid information, but a gross lack of commas render them unreadable. There are about 17 to 25 missing commas in each. Alas; the kids these days need to brush up on basic punctuation.
Michael Zupan's recent reviews of "Child's Play" and "Speed Racer" seem to contain valid information, but a gross lack of commas render them unreadable. There are about 17 to 25 missing commas in each. Alas; the kids these days need to brush up on basic punctuation.
09-03-08, 03:28 PM
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I've been lambasted before for an overuse of commas so I've tried to limit using them whenever they weren't truly necessary.
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09-03-08, 07:18 PM
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I read Michael Zupan's DVD review of Child's Play at http://www.dvdtalk.com/reviews/read.php?ID=34490 and...
Michael Zupan's recent reviews of "Child's Play" and "Speed Racer" seem to contain valid information, but a gross lack of commas render them unreadable. There are about 17 to 25 missing commas in each. Alas; the kids these days need to brush up on basic punctuation.
Michael Zupan's recent reviews of "Child's Play" and "Speed Racer" seem to contain valid information, but a gross lack of commas render them unreadable. There are about 17 to 25 missing commas in each. Alas; the kids these days need to brush up on basic punctuation.
09-03-08, 07:45 PM
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Well, he was referring to lack of a lot of commas. I've made some changes and understand where he's coming from. I like commas and once posted a review and was told it had too many, so I made sure to try and not go crazy with them. I sort of over-compensated and left out some. I made some changes to both reviews.
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